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    Hunter Aurelius Dracon: "The Wandering Wolf"

    Post by Hunter Dracon on Fri Aug 31, 2018 12:29 pm

    ~ “Speed, maneuverability, and accuracy are key in a dogfight. If you miss your shot or slow down too much, you're dead. Turn too tight or not tight enough, you're dead."

    "Sometimes the only way to make peace is to make war. But that's a rare occurrence."

    "I only do what i believe is necessary. Nothing more."

    "One shot can end one life, and save hundreds, if not thousands or millions. As a sniper, it's up to me to take it."

    "Those who meddle with time usually never survive. Me? I've got friends in high places."

    "A good person never intentionally hurts others, but always take responsibility for the casualties they cause."

    "A remarkable swordsman once told me that there was a limit to what a person could do alone. This gave me the drive to prove him wrong."

    “I fly alone. That way there isn’t anyone I need to protect or babysit. Other pilots just hold me back.”

    "He wreaks havoc from the shadows. Facing decisions few would ever confront. But just as the sniper lives by the gun. He could also die by the gun. The sniper must use cunning, and instinct. To remain… Bulletproof."

    [ Themes ]
    ~Boulevard of Broken Dreams - Green Day
    ~The Triumph - Jeff Williams feat. Casey Lee Williams
    ~Celldweller — The Wings of Icarus (feat. James Dooley)
    ~Persona 5 The Animation - Break in to Break Out
    ~America 2 - The Midnight

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    Name: Hunter Aurelius Dracon
    Nickname: Angel, or Wanderer
    Age: 28
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Bisexual (But leans more towards being straight)
    Species: Dark Angel (Dark Angels are a form of angel that have free will and are the result of a a human or other being having been resurrected/chosen due to a heroic or valiant sacrifice or end. Usually this means saving lives even though you'd be killed as a result. They have no ties to heaven, or hell and are practically the same as before they died besides their retractable wings, and the abilities they gain. They also age slower than normal humans, but only by another year)
    Alignment: Good. Hunter's true allegiances are too complicated for one or two words to really express. His objective in life as a Dark Angel, is and always will be saving the lives of others at any cost, without hesitation.

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    Appearance:
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    Height: 6'8.4"
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Hunter's skin is about average in color for your typical white male, tan, but still pale.
    Eyes: Hunter's eyes are a vibrant cyan color, but it the moonlight, turn silver with cyan and electric blue-white lightning patterns within the irises.
    Hair: Hunter's hair is black with a single cyan streak, split in half. His black hair turns silver in the moonlight.
    Looks: Hunter is a fairly handsome guy, even though he seems a bit rugged.

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    Specialties
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    Strengths/skills: Hunter is a gunslinger. An expert at precision shooting, especially while on the move. He's a melee weapons expert and uses swords, large knives, daggers, and particularly scythes to maximum effect on the battlefield when close quarters combat is necessary. He also uses throwing knives with explosive capabilities to great effect as well. Stealth, speed, and agility are his most useful tools besides his weapons in combat, and he has trained relentlessly to be the dominating force on the battlefield.
    Weaknesses/Flaws:
    ~Fatal Flaw: Hunter strives to be the best and to protect everyone he can and keep them out of harm's way. However, He can be slow to trust others, and is a lone wolf. He prefers to fight ALONE. Mainly because he relies on stealth in the beginning of a fight.

    ~Weaknesses: Hunter is vulnerable to someone with equal or higher skill, and while he is a great strategist because of his brilliant mind, he's not an expert like Grand Admiral Thrawn from star wars, who is a tactical genius. Although, Hunter's got a pretty hefty weakness for coffee, as long as it was good coffee used as bait or a bribe, he'd (usually) go right along with those who gave it to him. Hunter has also been known to try and save anyone who's in trouble, and it has nearly been his downfall many, many times.

    Special Abilities: Hunter’s primary ability has many different forms, and can manifest in two to three different ways. The first is the weakest. It gives him the ability to call on a pack of wolves for a short time, about ten minutes. The second manifests as a high power lever action rifle called The Angel's Kiss that can cause massive damage in the eight shots it carries. The third manifests as either a scythe or a sword for when Hunter has run out of ammo for the short time it takes for his ammunition stores to replenish. Hunter's ammo replenishment is a passive secondary perk, in which it takes thirty minutes to an hour for his ammo to be replenished AFTER being exhausted.

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    Personality:
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    Personality: Hunter is a charismatic young man, but has seen more horrors than anyone should ever have to witness, and has actually been around longer than his age suggests. Most people will see him as a caring and friends person during social interaction, but he prefers solitude as a result of the dangers of his occupation.

    Likes/hobbies:
    ~ A good dogfight. (Airplanes)
    ~ Protecting others
    ~ Helping people with their problems.
    ~ Sushi
    Dislikes:
    ~ Overly Flirtatious people.
    ~ Strong Alcoholic Drinks
    ~ People who seem to the think the weak and helpless are below them
    ~ People who try to hurt those they believe are below them in the process of trying to gain power.
    Fears:
    ~ People using his tech against him.
    ~ Himself.
    ~ People who know how to inflict the most pain possible while keeping their victims alive.

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    Family:
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    Parents: Deceases
    Mate: None
    Offspring: N/A
    Relative: Deceased
    Brothers/sisters: Unknown
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    History:
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    Brief Backstory: Hunter has been a Dark Angel for a long time, longer than his age would state, as a side effect of trans-dimensional time travel, and a rare form of reincarnation, which takes the most prominent versions of himself and compares them before choosing the most advanced and experienced across different timelines and dimensions. Both the most prominent and old versions’ memories, skills, and experiences (basically the full extent of their souls) merge to create a new version for current use.

    RP paragraph: Hunter glanced over the war-torn city from his vantage point of one the the last standing skyscrapers in the city. He was about halfway up the 60 story building. Many other buildings were sagging and leaning against each other, having refused to fully collapse. He unslung his Mk.84 Vagrant Semi-Automatic Sniper Rifle and placed a scope extension in front of his custom variable zoom 2.8x ACOG sight. He adjusted the scope extension to a 14x zoom, and scanned the battlefield with more clarity. Even though his normal eyesight was extremely sharp, he needed a better look at a few things. On his right shoulder was a rendition of a howling wolf in front of a moon. Both the moon and the wolf had various parts textured as a beautiful blue starlit sky.
    He spotted movement and adjusted the zoom further to 20x as well as adjusting the focus. The movement was a soldier of a hostile organization that Hunter had been fighting with fair success for three months. The insignia on the soldier’s uniform was a Bull bison with flaming eyes. Hunter smirked as he grew still and adjusted the scope for the range of 864 meters. He’d made note of various landmarks he could use for ranging ahead of time, and then he took his right hand and took a handfull of sand out of the jar that sat on the ledge in fornt of him him and held his hand up, slowly let the sand fall back into the jar. Most of the grains of sand were blown off course by the breeze, and Hunter gripped the rifle again, adjusting his aim, before he eased onto the trigger... and fired. The .338 armor piercing round streaked away, and a fraction of a second later, put a hole straight through the soldier’s helmet and head, spraying the ground beyond with blood and brain matter.


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    Re: Hunter Aurelius Dracon: "The Wandering Wolf"

    Post by sLy on Tue Sep 04, 2018 9:46 pm

    @Hunter Dracon wrote:
    Personal Info:
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    Species: Dark Angel (Dark Angels are a form of angel that have free will and are the result of a a human or other being having been resurrected/chosen due to a heroic or valiant sacrifice or end. Usually this means saving lives even though you'd be killed as a result. They have no ties to heaven, or hell and are practically the same as before they died besides their retractable wings, and the abilities they gain. They also age slower than normal humans, but only by another year)

    If you can fly with these wings, please add them to the skills/strengths section as well.

    @Hunter Dracon wrote:
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    Appearance:
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    Looks: Hunter is a fairly handsome guy, even though he seems a bit rugged.

    I'm going to need more than that. Include his typical clothing, any accessories and describe how he is 'fairly handsome but rugged'.

    @Hunter Dracon wrote:
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    Specialties
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    Strengths/skills: Hunter is a gunslinger. An expert at precision shooting, especially while on the move. He's a melee weapons expert and uses swords, large knives, daggers, and particularly scythes to maximum effect on the battlefield when close quarters combat is necessary. He also uses throwing knives with explosive capabilities to great effect as well. Stealth, speed, and agility are his most useful tools besides his weapons in combat, and he has trained relentlessly to be the dominating force on the battlefield.

    So to list his current strengths, hes:

    - An expert at shooting precisely, including on the move
    - An expert at melee weapons
    - A master at swords, knives, daggers and scythes
    - Carries explosive knives
    - Stealthy
    - Speedy + Agile
    - A 'great strategist' with a brilliant mind (This should be listed here, not in your weaknesses)
    - Can fly

    Some of these you need to elaborate a bit more. Ask yourself 'Why is he good a shooting?' and show us through feats he can do, rather than just telling us hes good at shooting. E.g. In terms of his precise shooting, how far can he shoot a target with a mostly guaranteed hit? Does he take into consideration air friction, wind strength and direction? Same goes for how is he stealthy, how is he fast and agile, and how is he a brilliant strategist.

    Also you do realise there's a huge list of melee weapons right? Are you implying that he has mastered using every single one of them or every type? If so, I would be expecting a greater weakness to balance this out.

    Explosive knives, I'm guessing they just explode on impact? If so, state the diameter of its explosion range. Does it also fling shrapnel? If so, range of shrapnel also needs to be mentioned.[/quote]


    Weaknesses/Flaws:
    ~Fatal Flaw: Hunter strives to be the best and to protect everyone he can and keep them out of harm's way. However, He can be slow to trust others, and is a lone wolf. He prefers to fight ALONE. Mainly because he relies on stealth in the beginning of a fight.

    ~Weaknesses: Hunter is vulnerable to someone with equal or higher skill, and while he is a great strategist because of his brilliant mind, he's not an expert like Grand Admiral Thrawn from star wars, who is a tactical genius. Although, Hunter's got a pretty hefty weakness for coffee, as long as it was good coffee used as bait or a bribe, he'd (usually) go right along with those who gave it to him. Hunter has also been known to try and save anyone who's in trouble, and it has nearly been his downfall many, many times.

    I'm just going to list the relevant flaws and weaknesses here:

    - An ideal to save even the worst of his enemies.

    That's literally it. Fighting alone is not a weakness or flaw. It's just his personality and should therefore be in there. Reliance on stealth is just fighting style, not flaw. "Vulnerable to someone with equal or higher skill" is not acceptable, simply because its common sense that anyone would be challenged by anyone of equal or higher skill. Coffee-baiting, I'm not even sure if he's going to stick to this weakness at all, and even if so, it's far too mild to counter-balance anything mentioned above.

    Take note, that the more strengths and skills you put in, the more weaknesses I will require you to list (at least one more than the number of strengths you have) and they have to balance out with one another. Weaknesses and flaws have to be something any character in combat situations can exploit and therefore defeat Hunter in. E.g. Someone who uses only melee weapons can have a weakness against ranged weapons, simply because they have nothing to close the distance between the two. Or someone who relies on stealth will have wide open and bright areas as a massive weakness because they have no place to hide behind.

    Another advice I would give is to look at the currently approved apps here, study how they form their flaws and weaknesses, before making your app.[/quote]


    Special Abilities: Hunter’s primary ability has many different forms, and can manifest in two to three different ways. The first is the weakest. It gives him the ability to call on a pack of wolves for a short time, about ten minutes. The second manifests as a high power lever action rifle called The Angel's Kiss that can cause massive damage in the eight shots it carries. The third manifests as either a scythe or a sword for when Hunter has run out of ammo for the short time it takes for his ammunition stores to replenish. Hunter's ammo replenishment is a passive secondary perk, in which it takes thirty minutes to an hour for his ammo to be replenished AFTER being exhausted.

    Strengths of ability:

    - Can summon wolves that last for 10 minutes. No mention of number of wolves, what they are made of, what sizes they are or if they possess any supernatural abilities themselves.
    - Can summon a sniper rifle with an 8-bullet magazine. No mention of range of rifle or speed of the bullet or rate of fire of the thing. Only detail is that it does "massive damage". Ammo replenishes every 30 minutes after entire magazine is depleted.
    - Can summon a sword or scythe to make up for the need to reload the sniper rifle, therefore covering his potential weakness. No mention of length, durability or strength of the weapons.

    Weaknesses/Limits of ability:

    - Literally none.

    In addition to adding the missing information for the strengths of each aspect of his ability, you will need at least one more weaknesses/limits than you have strengths. Also, please convert minutes to posts. There is absolutely no reliable way we can determine how much time has passed per post otherwise.


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    Personality: Hunter is a charismatic young man, but has seen more horrors than anyone should ever have to witness, and has actually been around longer than his age suggests. Most people will see him as a caring and friends person during social interaction, but he prefers solitude as a result of the dangers of his occupation.

    As per what was paraphrased in the app's template, you need a MINIMUM of 5 sentences.
    [/quote]


    RP paragraph: Hunter glanced over the war-torn city from his vantage point of one the the last standing skyscrapers in the city. He was about halfway up the 60 story building. Many other buildings were sagging and leaning against each other, having refused to fully collapse. He unslung his Mk.84 Vagrant Semi-Automatic Sniper Rifle and placed a scope extension in front of his custom variable zoom 2.8x ACOG sight. He adjusted the scope extension to a 14x zoom, and scanned the battlefield with more clarity. Even though his normal eyesight was extremely sharp, he needed a better look at a few things. On his right shoulder was a rendition of a howling wolf in front of a moon. Both the moon and the wolf had various parts textured as a beautiful blue starlit sky.
    He spotted movement and adjusted the zoom further to 20x as well as adjusting the focus. The movement was a soldier of a hostile organization that Hunter had been fighting with fair success for three months. The insignia on the soldier’s uniform was a Bull bison with flaming eyes. Hunter smirked as he grew still and adjusted the scope for the range of 864 meters. He’d made note of various landmarks he could use for ranging ahead of time, and then he took his right hand and took a handfull of sand out of the jar that sat on the ledge in fornt of him him and held his hand up, slowly let the sand fall back into the jar. Most of the grains of sand were blown off course by the breeze, and Hunter gripped the rifle again, adjusting his aim, before he eased onto the trigger... and fired. The .338 armor piercing round streaked away, and a fraction of a second later, put a hole straight through the soldier’s helmet and head, spraying the ground beyond with blood and brain matter.

    Keep in mind that you will be allowed only 1 free weapon on creation of your character and the app for it has to be made in the future.


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