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    Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

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    Species: European Dragon
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    Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Ami Suraj on Wed Dec 21, 2016 3:30 pm


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    Name: Ami Suraj [Meaning: Nectar Born Of The Gods]
    Nickname: Whiplash
    Age: 600 yrs
    Gender: Female
    Sexuality: Straight
    Species: Shadow Dragon Mix
    Alignment: Neutral
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 80 ft
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Black scales that are smooth and overlap one another. Along her whole body is brighter neon like purple luminescence that can lighten or darken at will.
    Eyes: Right- Soft Blue Left- Vibrant Purple
    Hair: N/A
    Looks: Ami is a very lean and slender dragon that's body is made for more, fast and stealthy movements more than anything. She walks on all fours and her winds attach near her shoulder blades. Her front limbs are average length while her hind quarters are more lengthy and long. Along her back is many thin, bristles that help protect her in fights and are able to be straightened or laid back as to not injure others or herself. The tail is fairly long and lean. Ami's wings are large and help her speed and glide around from either the ground or the air. She has four horns atop her head. Two medium length straight ones and two smaller curved ones. Her talons are straight and sharpened underneath like that of knives; curving at the tip and are retractable. Her teeth are sharp and rounded in shape, like an orca's, because of this she doesn't chew but rather tears off pieces and swallows them whole.
    Extra: Has a full set of body armor that she will wear should the occasion arise.
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    Strengths/skills: The art of stealth. Speed. Because of her dark scaling, she can blend into any shadow without a problem and practically disappear from view. Has the ability to read emotions. Can breath dark purple fire, although not stronger than normal fires, it simply turns dark purple.
    Weaknesses/Flaws: Because of her body type, her scales are very easy to penetrate if able to get a hold of her. Being left alone is a great weakness of hers; if left alone she tends to panic and basically becomes a sitting duck waiting to get caught.
    (She can cope with this weakness even in the company of living things from bugs to simple wildlife.)

    Special Abilities: Has the ability to read ones emotional thoughts; for example, they are recalling a heartbreaking memory, Ami can read the emotion but not actually what cause it. Ami's tail is very long and can be easily used as a whip.
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    Personality:
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    Personality: She is a very silent dragon. Choose to stay away from others but also hates being alone. Is very hyper and loves to run and prance. Is very creative and smart; a problem solver if you may. Very protective of those she is close to. Won't hesitate to eliminate others that threaten her or others close to herself. Will not stand for insolence. Likes to be alone but in the presence of another living creature, if she can, even insects will make do for the part of company. Is very loyal to her family, friends, and of course, mate.

    Likes/Hobbies: Loves all creatures; be it for food or other reasons, storms, flying, feeling of freedom, loves art or creating things from the mud or rocks or sticks, hiding in trees, acting much like a hatchling in many ways. She has a habit of acting like a bat and sleeping from branches upside down, no idea why.
    Dislikes: Irritating people, injuring of the weak, sports fighting, dragon hunters/chasers, being left alone for a long time, bright places.
    Fears: 1.)Darkness, Ironic yes, but has a fear of what lurks in the darkness than the dark itself. 2.) Loneliness, she fears being forever alone, not loveless but never hearing another voice or seeing another one of her kind's face. 3.)Cold, has a fear of the cold because of her other two fears. Darkness brings the loneliness and with loneliness comes the cold.
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    Family:
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    Parents: Deceased
    Mate: Lead
    Offspring:
    Stark - Son
    Skia - Son
    Zahra - Daughter
    Exynos - Son
    Tikta - Daughter
    Relative: N/A
    Brothers/sisters: N/A
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    History: Ami was born as a half-breed. Part shadow dragon, part European Dragon. And by all standards of Shadow dragons she is a sin against their kind and was deemed to be killed -as well as her parents- but when they hunted her down she escaped time after time again. And now that she is older, she can take a few down if they are not stronger than her or too numerous.

    Ami's name was given to her by her mother and father who thought she was the greatest gift from god and would, of course, bring joy to others like she did to them. Where her names meaning "Nectar Born Of The Gods" comes from.

    Being a shadow dragon is where she gets most of her powers. Her glowing luminescence markings, being able to blend into the shadows with ease and see in the dark like it the day, and last but not least, move as quickly and silently as she does. Also were her large wings come from.

    Dragon War Info- Ami was there during the war between humans and Dragons, though she didn't really participate in the battles, mostly just knew about the war and hid from the humans; helping any dragons that she found and could help. Otherwise she stayed in her den, only leaving when she really needed to eat.
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    RP paragraph: Ami let out a roar as she hunched her shoulders and raised her wings. Her tail lashed around behind her while her markings all flared with life and aggression. In the chilled air of winter, one could practically see each breath she took along with the heat coming from her open mouth which bared her rounded fangs. With a final warning growl, she lunged forward with her talons bared and teeth at the ready to bite as she opened her large wings to get closer and higher above her target.


    Last edited by Ami Suraj on Mon Jan 09, 2017 10:47 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Edited)


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    "When you look at the sky of stars, do you see the broken dreams, the lost souls, an falling hearts?" - Ami
    ~"Fairy tales don't tell children that dragons exist. Children already know dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children they can be killed" ~ G.K. Chesterton
    ~When we are HAPPY we enjoy the music, when we are SAD we listen to the lyrics.
    ~You either die a Hero or live long enough to see yourself become the Villain
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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Cedric on Wed Dec 21, 2016 5:15 pm

    Hello Ami!~

    Just a couple of things I'd like you to clarify. One, your ability is kind of foggy- not really defined and such. Could you fix that up, maybe look at other character's pages for the layout you should use?

    Secondly, if your Dragon is 800 years old, shouldn't she have participated in the dragon wars 100 years ago in the site lore?

    If you clarify this, we can get one step closer to re-approving your application.


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    Because he's got so many damn knights."
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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Cedric on Wed Dec 21, 2016 7:34 pm

    My apologies, the Dragon War was 200 years ago. AS your dragon is still 800, it still should be answered as to whether or not your dragon was there/where they were if they were not.


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    "It's not that I hate people. It's that I dislike people. There IS a difference, even if it's subtle. Just means that making friends is a bit harder for me. Speaking of which, Why's Allelujah's kingdom considered to be the darkest kingdom of all?


    Because he's got so many damn knights."
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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Ami Suraj on Mon Jan 02, 2017 5:30 pm

    Edited- Let me know if i need to fix anything else :)


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    "When you look at the sky of stars, do you see the broken dreams, the lost souls, an falling hearts?" - Ami
    ~"Fairy tales don't tell children that dragons exist. Children already know dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children they can be killed" ~ G.K. Chesterton
    ~When we are HAPPY we enjoy the music, when we are SAD we listen to the lyrics.
    ~You either die a Hero or live long enough to see yourself become the Villain
    Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bqu5GyIH0BE

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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by sLy on Mon Jan 09, 2017 9:15 pm

    Hey Ami,

    Just need you to fix a few things with your abilities. I know you have the ability to read thoughts for quite some time, but for our TB standards, it is a form of metaplaying in any RP, combat or non-combat. As a suggestion, you might want to consider nerfing it to being able to detect another person’s emotions instead?

    Also the sleeping mist can be considered overpowered if no one can break out of it. Maybe add that there is a period where they become drowsy before they fall asleep? And during that drowsy period, they may need to do something to shake it off before falling asleep? Also how deep is their sleep? Will they snap awake if they take, say a heavy claw strike to the side?

    Bump when ready.


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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Ami Suraj on Mon Jan 09, 2017 10:49 pm

    Bump!
    I actually forgot about Ami's ability to make other sleep so i just removed it cause she never uses it anyway, also edited the mine reading ability for you, let me know if there is anything i need to change for ya :3


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    "When you look at the sky of stars, do you see the broken dreams, the lost souls, an falling hearts?" - Ami
    ~"Fairy tales don't tell children that dragons exist. Children already know dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children they can be killed" ~ G.K. Chesterton
    ~When we are HAPPY we enjoy the music, when we are SAD we listen to the lyrics.
    ~You either die a Hero or live long enough to see yourself become the Villain
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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by sLy on Mon Jan 09, 2017 11:40 pm

    I think it should be fine.

    APPROVED.D


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    Re: Ami Suraj [Updated Ver.17]

    Post by Ami Suraj on Fri Jan 13, 2017 5:32 pm

    yay :D


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    "When you look at the sky of stars, do you see the broken dreams, the lost souls, an falling hearts?" - Ami
    ~"Fairy tales don't tell children that dragons exist. Children already know dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children they can be killed" ~ G.K. Chesterton
    ~When we are HAPPY we enjoy the music, when we are SAD we listen to the lyrics.
    ~You either die a Hero or live long enough to see yourself become the Villain
    Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bqu5GyIH0BE

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