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    Post by Ichor on Sat Nov 05, 2016 11:05 am

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    Name: Ichor (Ike Iota)
    Nickname: Ich, Ike, Croupier, The Magician
    Age: Appears 19.
    Gender: Male.
    Sexuality: Demisexual (One who does not experience sexual attraction unless they form a strong emotional connection with someone).
    Species: Human with benefits.
    Alignment: Neutral.

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    Appearance:
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    Height: 180.34 cm (5’11’’)
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Light/pale skinned.
    Eyes: Cornflower blue.
    Hair: Slightly messy, but usually well kept black hair.
    Looks: Ichor is usually found clothed in a white, long-sleeved, button-up shirt (loosened at the collar) with a black tie tucked nicely in his peculiar black vest. His black gloves compliments his top hat, which is designed with an elegant black ribbon, that seems to always stay atop his head. Ich sports regular black slacks, that are perfectly aligned with his polished dress shoes. Just underneath his eyes, a mark on either side of his face is present; they have a unique design, almost like a cross.
    He has a slim figure and his weight is slightly below average for his height. He isn't muscular but he is not exactly weak, though he just probably won't win a physical contact fight.

    He does have a wardrobe of sets of fancy clothing, suited to him perfectly. Most consist of suits, similar to what he usually wears.

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    Specialties
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    Strengths/skills:
    -Putting a smile on someone’s face. No matter who the person is, he usually succeeds at making them smile.
    -He is very persuasive and manipulative, which aids him in making others agree with his views or perhaps do as he says.
    -He is quick and agile mentally and physically, always moving with elegance and poise.
    -With the amount of concentration and will he has had throughout his life, it enables him to use his abilities more precisely.
    -He is motivated. Sad and disappointed, but motivated nonetheless.
    -He is incredibly great at playing with cards, and gambling.
    -He could do a variety of magic tricks, such like that of a magician.
    -He doesn’t bring attention himself, he fits in with the crowd and can blend in easily.
    -He can read a human’s/an entities expressions and actions/body language pretty well.
    -He is attractive and cute.


    Weaknesses/Flaws:

    -Usual Flaws:
    He get's easily irritable, though he tries his best to hide it.
    He is not physically strong.
    He get's sleepy easily because of how poorly he treats his body.
    He can get sick more easily than some.
    He gets quite embarrassed if he slips up his act.
    He has a facade and he is somewhat emotionally conflicted. (Read more in personality.)
    He is a bit insecure and sometimes tries a little too hard to look good.


    -Allusion Limitations: (Only an illusion.)
    Excessive use runs a high risk of Ichor losing track of reality, and gradually falling into madness.
    May require a massive amount of energy to maintain, depending on how long the illusion goes on for.
    Of course, due to energy drainage from using the power, Ichor won't be able to use it right away after already using it. He has the option to use it soon after, though it leads to a risk of him collapsing from exhaustion. He may be able to use it in short bursts, but that is still risky to his health; he shouldn't use this power excessively anyway (due to the first limitation and by the fact that he hates making a fool of himself).
    Things already present are easier to place over an illusion on, while bringing new objects/people that are not currently present could take more energy to sustain.
    It is possible to not be able to use the power depending on the object or person, if they have a strong willpower or are magically safe and contained, etc.

    -Ichor Limitations: There is a 20% chance of this power actually working on other mortals; if it does not work, then the one who drinks it will die within the week, excluding Ichor. Note that whoever drinks this once, they have to drink it again, eventually...
    When Ich drinks his blood, he must drink one pint of his blood to look like he hasn’t aged. Of course, by drinking this much, there is not a doubt that he may faint; his mouth will also smell of iron and other elements within blood/ichor for a little while, unless he cleans out his mouth. The next time he needs to drink his blood, after drinking it, would be in eight weeks.
    He will still die after about 100 years, most likely. Which sucks. Poor Ich...


    Special Abilities:

    Allusion - The ability to create illusions that will make reality seem false. Ich can induce illusions into others and himself. He can change people, places, locations, events, bring anything forth out of nowhere and make anything seemingly vanish, although it hasn’t.  
    The illusion is mental and affects the person’s mind / what they are able to see. Their mind is filled with the illusion and they cannot view the reality. From whatever they see, can affect them emotionally. By reacting to what they see, they can affect reality, whether they know it or not. Such as, if they are running from something then scream and shout, nearby people may hear and see them acting that particular way.
    Ich can place an illusion on nearby specific individuals within a 35 meter radius.
    This ability could last up to an hour, usually around 5-30 minutes (and maybe not on user accounts but on NPCs, yeah), depending on how much the victim falls into the influence of the illusion.
    Depending on how long the victim's posts are, this ability will last up to 1-2 posts if the character has strong willpower. If the character has low willpower, then this ability would last up to around 3-5 posts; the two character account holders may always compromise about the timeframe.

    Mnemosia - A power that can only be used in dire situations, such as when at death's door. This ability allows him to erase a person's memory of Ichor's own existence. Of course, this can only be used on living creatures. By using this, it immediately halts the attacker to give Ich even just a single second of time to dodge an attack. The attacker does forget everything about Ichor, even his impact on them. Though they may not forget about their lust to kill. By using this, it does not only affect the attacker but Ichor as well. Every time this is used, although not often, fragments of Ich's own memory is forgotten, similar to amnesia. But, it is not guaranteed that Ichor nor the attacker may remember their lost memory.
    To have this power in effect, Ichor must accept the fact that he may die then and there. By that, if he believes he may die on the spot, then this ability will protect him from that happening. If he is naive and thinks there is no way he could die, then he may as well just die. See, from his fear of being deathly afraid of death, this may go either way as it really depends on the situation.
    Now you may be thinking, "Hey, he'll just power-play his character because blah." Well, don't think that. I am a fair person.

    Ichor - The essence of immortal, golden blood that flows through a god’s veins. This blood holds magical power and with it, the possibility to bring the appearance of agelessness to those that drink it.  By drinking his own blood, Ich will look as if he hasn’t aged and stay at his physical prime.

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    Personality:
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    Personality:

    Ichor is a happy-go-lucky kind of guy who loves a good laugh. He enjoys playing around with select few subjects that intrigue him; he is clever and intelligent when it comes to games of his, always being levelheaded.  Although Ich gives an aura of predictability, he is very unpredictable. He changes his patterns to confuse and irritate individuals. At heart, he is a very kind soul that just enjoys to live his life to the extreme fullest, whatever that may be. He doesn’t mean to bring harm to others; he only wants them to realize that they shouldn’t take life so seriously.

    On another note, he experiences great bits of loneliness and frustration. He puts up a facade to hide any negative emotions he has, so as to make others like him. Yet to no avail.  It always confuses him as to why people don’t appreciate his existence, even if he hasn’t done anything wrong, or anything at all.

    Despite his happiness of a facade, he does usually stay quiet to those he doesn’t know well. If he wanted to get to know someone, he’d play a silly, harmless prank on them. After knowing someone for a time, he'd feel more comfortable around them, and not feel so stiff. He knows how to relax and enjoy his time with anyone he knows, always showing them his friendly side full of joy and free from worry.

    To explain his persuasive/manipulative skills, he usually uses this when dealing with criminals or those he considers cruel/evil. Maybe even with the pretty ladies (wink wink). Though, if he'd care to, he'd use his persuasiveness to get what he wants.

    Ichor knows when someone flirts with him. He doesn’t really appreciate it, in fact, he disapproves of it. He thinks it’s childish or lame. If he wanted someone to get with him, he’d actually try to get to know them rather than play around with his and their feelings. If the person actually wanted to get with him, instead of flirting and getting nowhere with it, he’d appreciate it if they acted and tried for once.

    Another side of him, when he has days off or free time, he usually busies himself with honing his tricks and abilities. Though when he's feeling out of it, he'd tend to doze off in his home or go for walks and observe people. He may do other things out of his way, though that is when it demands his time for such things.

    Ichor does also give off smiles of understanding — perhaps even much more than understanding. It is one of those rare smiles with a quality of eternal reassurance in it. It may seem to confront the whole external world for an instant and then concentrates on you with an irresistible prejudice in your favor. It could understand you just so far as you wanted to be understood, believed in you as you would like to believe in yourself, and assured you that it had precisely the impression of you that, at your best, you hoped to convey.


    Likes/Hobbies:
    He likes to work as a dealer in casinos. He also just likes casinos and occasionally gambling.
    Cards. He enjoys playing around with them, such as doing tricks or card games.
    Pulling pranks, cracking jokes, and playing all sorts of games.
    He appreciates people who are actually willing to do things for him.
    Animals/Pets; always a safe choice.
    Circuses are always entertaining to Ich.
    Helping individuals find their place in the world.


    Dislikes:
    He dislikes creatures that are so irritably rude and arrogant.
    People that disobey regulation; rule breakers; those who ruin the fun.
    Giving hints. It really takes away the joy in playing around with people.
    Humans or other entities that discriminate each other. It’s really sad.
    He hates the fact that people don’t like him or show their appreciation of him.
    He doesn't like getting dirty, but he will tolerate it.
    Hates making a fool of himself.


    Fears:
    He is afraid that he will never get to experience true happiness.
    He is deathly afraid of death.

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    Family:
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    Parents: F. Iota, L. Iota (Both Deceased.)
    Mate: N/A
    Offspring: N/A
    Relative: N/A
    Brothers/sisters: N/A
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    History:
    Things happened, other things happened, then some more things, maybe even something else happened, and then another thing, and a little bit of even more things...Eventually, things happened to the point where things are now as they appear in our present reality.
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    RP paragraph:

    Ichor glanced down at the table in front of him. There was a neatly assortment of cards and poker chips. He didn’t remember how it all got like that, but something told him it was of his doing. Shifting his gaze upward, he noticed he stood within a casino. An empty one at that. Not a soul was in sight. It felt quite lonesome in the place.
    Many, many game tables held their necessary items and objects to play a sort of game. Elaborately decorated machinery flashed their lights to attract customers to play a game; their premade tunes sounded out which matched with the movement of the lights. The carpet was a vast red and green with peculiar designs that lay across the entirety of the casino’s interior. Golden chandeliers hung over the absurdly large room, with engraved pillars seemingly holding up the ceiling. A colorful and long bar table held shelves full of various liquor and liquids. Placed upon the elegant walls around the room, flat screen T.V’s broadcasted an unknown sport or talkshow. No windows could be found, except for the singular large one built into the ceiling, which was located in the center of the room. The window revealed nothing but pure darkness behind it’s glass...


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    May bleed, nectareous; for the Gods eat not
    Man's food, nor slake as he with sable wine
    Their thirst, thence bloodless and from death exempt


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 2:02 pm

    Heya Ichor! I has had a talk with Sly, and here's what you need to change.

    Your character is immortal. This is an instant decline, your character can literally go into outer space and survive without a suit. They can go through the centre of a sun and wave at someone (after they heal). Remove the immortality.

    @Ichor wrote:-Other stuff (random things that don't have to do with power).

    Sadly, even if it's not related to your character's power, you still need to put down all the strengths that he has. This is because of quests which he can join later down the line, and every strength influences his potential to be able to do these quests. You need to put down every single strength that he has (just keep in mind they need to balance out with weaknesses too!).

    Your ability with the uncertain manipulation is too vague, we don't actually know what it does properly. Please give examples of what he is able to do in your app.

    Please bump when you have changed these things ^^"



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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Ichor on Sun Nov 06, 2016 6:23 pm

    Editted~


    -Changed abilities/powers
    -Added/fixed for better limitations/weaknesses
    -Changed history
    -Added more personality
    -Added & changed some things to likes and dislikes
    -Made rp paragraph better
    -Changed fears
    -Added a thing in skills/strengths
    -Changed nicknames
    -Added an unnoticeable sense of humor


    Is this any better or still no...? ;-;


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by sLy on Mon Nov 07, 2016 8:04 pm

    -Ichor Limitations: There is a 20% chance of this power actually working on other mortals; if it does not work, then the one who drinks it will die within the week, excluding Ichor. Note that whoever drinks this once, they have to drink it again, eventually...
    When Ich drinks his blood, he must drink one pint of his blood to look like he hasn’t aged. Of course, by drinking this much, there is not a doubt that he may faint; his mouth will also smell of iron and other elements within blood/ichor for a little while, unless he cleans out his mouth. The next time he needs to drink his blood, after drinking it, would be in eight weeks.
    He will still die after about 100 years, most likely. Which sucks. Poor Ich...

    The problem with this limitation is that we are not using a dice system to determine if the person is given immortality or not. Even so, immortality is banned no matter what unfortunately. You are more than welcome to change it to something else, such as healing.

    -Mnemosia: If used on himself, he will forget everything about himself, everything. Like amnesia, except even more severe. If used against another creature, they will only forget about him, only him and how he affected their life, and nothing else.
    This power shan’t be used regularly, but only when Ichor feels that it is better his existence is erased from another individual’s mind.

    This is not even a limitation. Additionally, why would he ever going to need to use it on himself?

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    Illusion - Ich can create illusions that will make reality seem false. He can induce illusions into others and himself. He can change people, places, locations, events, bring anything forth out of nowhere and make anything seemingly vanish, although it hasn’t.

    After reading this and the limitations, I am going to request that you add more information on to what extent does the illusion affect his victims. Does it only affect what they see? What they feel? How easy is it to break out of the illusions and how long does the illusion last for (in posts)? Unfortunately, there are a lot of vague ideas thrown in here that needs to be cleared up. For example, you stated that the illusion 'may' not work and 'may' only affect what isn't there already (I'm assuming this means you cannot simply shift one person present into another space). What do you mean by 'may'? You have to be specific with your limitations.

    Ichor - The essence of immortal, golden blood that flows through a god’s veins. This blood holds magical power and with it, the possibility to bring agelessness to those that drink it.  By drinking his own blood, he can stay ageless and stay at his physical prime.

    Immortality is banned here unfortunately.

    Mnemosia: The ability to erase the memory of Ichor’s own existence from the mind of others and himself. Nothing more, nothing less.

    Although I admit this is rather unique, I have debated about this ability with another member of staff and we have concluded that we cannot allow it, sorry. The reason being that you can simply use this ability infrequently to wipe out any mistake that your character makes during an RP and literally can always walk around the streets with a clean slate. You can erase the memories of police or any authority figures and you would never be found guilty of say, robbing a bank, murdering a leader or even destroying half a city.

    Another reason is that this ability is a form of godmodding other characters to simply forget your character and whatever wrongs he had committed. Note that in the near future, a bounty system would be implemented that will judge your character's actions, and we would not permit anyone to have an ability that will simply escape such a system.


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Ichor on Tue Nov 08, 2016 2:29 pm

    @sLy wrote:
    -Ichor Limitations: There is a 20% chance of this power actually working on other mortals; if it does not work, then the one who drinks it will die within the week, excluding Ichor. Note that whoever drinks this once, they have to drink it again, eventually...
    When Ich drinks his blood, he must drink one pint of his blood to look like he hasn’t aged. Of course, by drinking this much, there is not a doubt that he may faint; his mouth will also smell of iron and other elements within blood/ichor for a little while, unless he cleans out his mouth. The next time he needs to drink his blood, after drinking it, would be in eight weeks.
    He will still die after about 100 years, most likely. Which sucks. Poor Ich...

    The problem with this limitation is that we are not using a dice system to determine if the person is given immortality or not. Even so, immortality is banned no matter what unfortunately. You are more than welcome to change it to something else, such as healing.

    The Ichor power does not grant immortality. It only makes the drinker of the ichor look young and as if they haven't aged. The person will still die.

    @sLy wrote:
    -Mnemosia: If used on himself, he will forget everything about himself, everything. Like amnesia, except even more severe. If used against another creature, they will only forget about him, only him and how he affected their life, and nothing else.
    This power shan’t be used regularly, but only when Ichor feels that it is better his existence is erased from another individual’s mind.

    This is not even a limitation. Additionally, why would he ever going to need to use it on himself?

    I'll specify more then, but that is, if I am still allowed to keep this ability if I change some things about it.

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    Illusion - Ich can create illusions that will make reality seem false. He can induce illusions into others and himself. He can change people, places, locations, events, bring anything forth out of nowhere and make anything seemingly vanish, although it hasn’t.

    After reading this and the limitations, I am going to request that you add more information on to what extent does the illusion affect his victims. Does it only affect what they see? What they feel? How easy is it to break out of the illusions and how long does the illusion last for (in posts)? Unfortunately, there are a lot of vague ideas thrown in here that needs to be cleared up. For example, you stated that the illusion 'may' not work and 'may' only affect what isn't there already (I'm assuming this means you cannot simply shift one person present into another space). What do you mean by 'may'? You have to be specific with your limitations.

    I'll just get rid of this then...because of other things.

    @sLy wrote:
    Ichor - The essence of immortal, golden blood that flows through a god’s veins. This blood holds magical power and with it, the possibility to bring agelessness to those that drink it.  By drinking his own blood, he can stay ageless and stay at his physical prime.

    Immortality is banned here unfortunately.

    Even as it says immortality, it is only referring that ichor is, by definition, a liquid that flows through a gods veins. It still does not grant immortality to my character or others that drink it. I'll reword it.

    @sLy wrote:
    Mnemosia: The ability to erase the memory of Ichor’s own existence from the mind of others and himself. Nothing more, nothing less.

    Although I admit this is rather unique, I have debated about this ability with another member of staff and we have concluded that we cannot allow it, sorry. The reason being that you can simply use this ability infrequently to wipe out any mistake that your character makes during an RP and literally can always walk around the streets with a clean slate. You can erase the memories of police or any authority figures and you would never be found guilty of say, robbing a bank, murdering a leader or even destroying half a city.

    Another reason is that this ability is a form of godmodding other characters to simply forget your character and whatever wrongs he had committed. Note that in the near future, a bounty system would be implemented that will judge your character's actions, and we would not permit anyone to have an ability that will simply escape such a system.

    What if I changed some things about this? Like specify things and give it limits. Will that do then or no?


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by sLy on Tue Nov 08, 2016 6:05 pm

    I still don't really see where Mnemosia is going to apply unless he needs to wipe out someone's memories of them. You can try and add limitations to this ability, but keep in mind that this is basically allowing you to commit any crime in TB and get away scot free. It doesn't really help if he is also having a prankster nature.


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Ichor on Wed Nov 16, 2016 6:09 pm

    Bump and edited.

    -Added onto personality
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    -Revised weaknesses/strengths


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by sLy on Wed Nov 16, 2016 11:20 pm

    Mnemosia still needs further explaining due to the calibre of this ability. What are the processes he need to take so the ability will take effect? E.g. does he need eye contact? Physical contact? Etc. Even if this is his last ditch effort to escape a potentially finishing blow, there still needs to be a window where there is a risk that it will not work at all (aside from working only on living beings, since chances of that being otherwise is very slim. Theres only one character currently who is not a living being). Otherwise he just cannot be beat.

    A huge illusion that lasts for hours can seem waaaaay too much. Is there another way for the victim to break out of it aside from putting it all to sheer willpower? A standard fight doesnt last for an hour and generally ends quickly (I would say roughly 5-15min). Therefore, I would consider reducing the duration. Its not that hard to convert it to post. Just say the duration is dependent on the victim's mental strength (1 post for those with very high mental strength, up to 3 posts for weaker mental strength). Allusion also needs a 'cooldown' between casting so he cant just spam and abuse it.


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Ichor on Fri Nov 18, 2016 3:11 pm

    Things in black were added/edited.

    @Ichor wrote:
    -Allusion Limitations: (Only an illusion.)
    Excessive use runs a high risk of Ichor losing track of reality, and gradually falling into madness.
    May require a massive amount of energy to maintain, depending on how long the illusion goes on for.
    Of course, due to energy drainage from using the power, Ichor won't be able to use it right away after already using it. He has the option to use it soon after, though it leads to a risk of him collapsing from exhaustion. He may be able to use it in short bursts, but that is still risky to his health; he shouldn't use this power excessively anyway (due to the first limitation and by the fact that he hates making a fool of himself).
    Things already present are easier to place over an illusion on, while bringing new objects/people that are not currently present could take more energy to sustain.
    It is possible to not be able to use the power depending on the object or person, if they have a strong willpower or are magically safe and contained, etc.

    Allusion - The ability to create illusions that will make reality seem false. Ich can induce illusions into others and himself. He can change people, places, locations, events, bring anything forth out of nowhere and make anything seemingly vanish, although it hasn’t.  
    The illusion is mental and affects the person’s mind / what they are able to see. Their mind is filled with the illusion and they cannot view the reality. From whatever they see, can affect them emotionally. By reacting to what they see, they can affect reality, whether they know it or not. Such as, if they are running from something then scream and shout, nearby people may hear and see them acting that particular way.
    Ich can place an illusion on nearby specific individuals within a 35 meter radius.
    This ability could last up to an hour, usually around 5-30 minutes (and maybe not on user accounts but on NPCs, yeah), depending on how much the victim falls into the influence of the illusion.
    Depending on how long the victim's posts are, this ability will last up to 1-2 posts if the character has strong willpower. If the character has low willpower, then this ability would last up to around 3-5 posts; the two character account holders may always compromise about the timeframe.


    Mnemosia - A power that can only be used in dire situations, such as when at death's door. This ability allows him to erase a person's memory of Ichor's own existence. Of course, this can only be used on living creatures. By using this, it immediately halts the attacker to give Ich even just a single second of time to dodge an attack. The attacker does forget everything about Ichor, even his impact on them. Though they may not forget about their lust to kill. By using this, it does not only affect the attacker but Ichor as well. Every time this is used, although not often, fragments of Ich's own memory is forgotten, similar to amnesia. But, it is not guaranteed that Ichor nor the attacker may remember their lost memory.
    To have this power in effect, Ichor must accept the fact that he may die then and there. By that, if he believes he may die on the spot, then this ability will protect him from that happening. If he is naive and thinks there is no way he could die, then he may as well just die. See, from his fear of being deathly afraid of death, this may go either way as it really depends on the situation.
    Now you may be thinking, "Hey, he'll just power-play his character because blah." Well, don't think that. I am a fair person.


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by sLy on Fri Nov 18, 2016 8:43 pm

    Alright, just add your explanation of the Allusions limitation and the durations of the ability into your app and that ability should be fine.

    Death is not enabled without permission of all users involved in the RP. Of course, in a combat RP scenario involving expert combat RPers, Mnemosia wouldn't be a problem, but I am still pretty worried that if a less experienced combat RPer fights Ichor and suddenly gets flashed by Mnemosia, there will be potential for arguments and such. For now, I will say Mnemosia is fine if you include that explanation, but please be aware that I will monitor the ability and may pull it out if things suddenly go awry.


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    Re: Ichor Iota

    Post by Ichor on Sat Nov 19, 2016 11:37 am

    Everything that I stated in my previous post were already added into my bio.


    And honestly, I highly, highly doubt I'd take advantage of a "less experienced combat RPer."
    I'm a compromiser, not an arguer.


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