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    Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

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    Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Volestri on Thu Oct 27, 2016 10:23 pm

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    Personal Info:
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    Name: Volestri Steini.
    Nickname: Soldier-87.
    Age: 42 years old.
    Gender: Male.
    Sexuality: Straight.
    Species: Intelligensaurus Erectus, or the Upright Intelligent Lizard. Common name is Reptoid though.
    Alignment: True Neutral.
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 6'9 feet tall.
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Volestri is covered in scaly purple skin with orange strips and a white throat, chest, and abdominal region.
    Eyes: Golden Yellow.
    Hair: He possess no hair, but has light orange quills on his head.
    Looks: Volestri looks like a humanoid dinosaur, having an erect back, similar to a human or other humanoid species. He had four claws digits, and four toes, however, one is reduced to a dew claw. On his third toe, he has a larger claw, which gives away his prehistoric ancestor origins. To be exact, he is descended from raptors, Dakotaraptor steini to be exact. He is also what passes of as muscular in reptilian terms, and stands proud and tall.
    He is however almost always covered in an exoskeleton armor, said armor being thick and heavy, the joints being less padded to allow more movement. The armor being a gunmetal grey, with less padded areas being black. He Also posses a helmet, long to fit his head, and having a visor. It has a special way of opening to remove it, which involves some automated part displacement to easily remove it. The armor also had a slight touch of a crimson red, a strip around his arms and some on his chest.
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    Specialties
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    Strengths/skills:

    Strength.
    The natural strength of a Reptoid is above human level, being at the same strength of a male Silverback gorilla. A typical man can bench his own weight, which is usually around 185 pounds, with a few exceptions, and since a Silverback is about 20 times that strength, this means he can easily lift up a car over his head and throw it down, or even tip over a truck.

    Enhanced strength.
    Because of his exoskeleton armor, his already natural strength is boosted, bringing it to super reptoid levels, being able to now lift 4 ton boulders for a short period of time and even make dents in steel walls. It should be noted however that this drains the suit's power.

    Speed and Agility.
    A reptoid speed and agility is outstanding, being able to jump a good 8 feet into the air, and being able to run up to 30 MPH, being even faster than the fastest human recorded. This effectively makes them masters of parkour.

    Sense of smell.
    The sense of smell of a reptoid is very acute, being able to distinguish a single scent out of many. It is possible that this was a holdover from their Cretaceous ancestors, and they decided to keep it after millions of years of evolution.

    Weaknesses/Flaws:

    Armor weak points.
    The more flexible bits of armor around the joints/moving parts are less durable that the other spots, meaning a well placed hit/shot/cut can penetrate these points. They are around the neck, joints, a portion of the mid section and tail.

    Lack of knowledge of the world's culture(s).
    Being from another planet, he lacks the basic knowledge of anything and everything of this world. Thankfully because of a translator system built into his helmet, he can speak the native tongues of people on the planet he is on. This means if it gets damaged, it can't communicate however.

    Exoskeleton armor's battery.
    While the exoskeleton armor is very strong, it does have a limited power supply. Extended combat will drain the suit's power, which limits the enhanced strength it ceases to happen, which means he needs to recharge again... which he can't do in battle. Say, about 15-25 minutes at a time for combat related purposes, while about an hour for other stuff, like stealth operations.

    Exoskeleton armor's melting point.
    While the armor can be classified as being stronger and lighter than titanium, it should be noted that it has a lower melting point, being about 900°F. This anything higher can cause extensive melting damage to the suit.

    Exoskeleton armor vulnerabilities.
    The armor of the, while strong, can't survive certain things. The armor can't survive extreme heat, as well as extreme cold, meaning strong heat and ice based attacks can weaken it, heat melting it while ice makes it more brittle. Heavy physical attacks and gunfire also seem affect to it, the less padded areas in more so. However, it should be noted of what kind of weapon or attack you use. Stuff like a super powered punches, swords, etc can cause a lot of damage, but stuff like non powered weaponry/attacks (aka normal human level strength) probably wont do a lot of it.... however, say you use a normal sword for example, and strike the less padded areas, you're likely to penetrate the armor.



    Special Abilities:

    Thrusters.
    Attached to back of the suit are a pair of jet thrusters, which grants him a hovering ability. This takes little energy from the suit depending how long he plans to be in the air. The longer the hovering, the more he eats up the energy. He can hover over 10 feet in the air, more of a way to get an aerial view rather then true flight, since it was not design for such a task. It should be noted that if the thrusters get damaged, he will not be able to hover.

    Armor durability.
    The armor is quite durable, being able to shrug off physical attacks and most types of gunfire. However, heavier attacks and gunfire do seem to affect it, as well as elemental attacks. See more in weaknesses.

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    Personality:
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    Personality: Volestri used to be a super serious soldier... but kinda changed once he got stranded on the planet. He is not as serious as before unless in battle, and usually sticks to himself until he is needed for something, or if he decides to do it. When serious, he doesn't take shit from no one, and will try to pick a fight with anybody who decides to mess with him. When not serious however, he is most likely going to laze around and wait. Talk about a switch personality?

    Likes/Hobbies:
    - Meat.
    - Things that remind him of his home planet.
    - Trying to learn how things work around here.
    - Training.
    Dislikes:
    - Greasy foods.
    - Extreme cold weather.
    - Having his things broken.
    - Getting talked down to.
    Fears:
    - Dying in an pathetic way.
    - Getting experimented on.
    - Feeling useless when needed.
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    Family:
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    Parents: Unknown.
    Mate: N/A.
    Offspring: N/A.
    Relative: N/A.
    Brothers/sisters: N/A.
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    History: He once lived on a planet named Sauria, and was a soldier there. He then was sent to The Beyond to learn more of it, arriving via here via a space ship, in which he decided to join the Shadow Raiders to make his work easier.
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    RP paragraph: How about no?


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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Volestri on Sun Nov 06, 2016 12:46 pm

    Bump.
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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 1:04 pm

    Heya Volestri! I just have a few things for you to have a think about and edit please ^^"

    With your shield, you mention that it is able to block ranged attack, but what if something of equal power strikes it? For example, what if a creature identical to him tried to punch him, or what would happen if something tried to bite him. Would it still be able to block it, or would physical attacks break through the shield and go onto his armour?

    Also, his armour is incredibly powerful-perhaps make it heavier so that it slows him down a little. (I'm saying that because the rewards for wearing the armour greatly outweigh the negatives. However there are barely any weaknesses to your armour compared to the positives that it gives. Perhaps, if you wanted to keep speed, add more weaknesses to it. Give it a lower melting temperature, or something like that (it's up to you as to what you do).)

    How far from the ground can he hover? As if its high, he may as well be able to fly ! Razz (Another positive for the shield!!)

    How much power does the shield have? How many things can it block? It's incredibly powerful right now, maybe think about some things which you can change to weaken it... and not make it kinda crazy powerful compared to the rest of the site Razz

    I hope this helps! Please bump when you have edited it, or if you have questions, don't be afraid to ask me!
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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Volestri on Sun Nov 06, 2016 1:38 pm

    Bumpity bumpity bump bump bump.
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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 1:55 pm

    Hmm, how well is the armour able to endure other normal attacks, after the shield breaks? Is it able to survive another 8 shots? (all of which you could potentially just dodge)

    And maybe lower the melting temperature a tad more xD Or give the armour another weakness, maybe it can have object sheer through it ? Or something like that, it's up to you.
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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Volestri on Sun Nov 06, 2016 3:08 pm

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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 3:21 pm

    I think this might be lost in CB if I say it there xD

    The armour you have is, right now even after the nerfs we have put on it, it's still incredibly powerful.

    Here are the pros;
    ~Can hover 10 feet
    ~Has a shield which blocks 8 (or 6) normal hits or 2 huge ones.
    ~Armour is light.
    ~Armour is strong, able to endure basically any hit.
    ~Makes him incredibly strong with its power.

    Cons;
    ~It depletes (but how quickly, we don't know) energy during fights.
    ~Doesn't let him fly.
    ~Low melting temp.

    Can you see what I mean by it's literally a perfect armour? Maybe make it brittle or something to different types of attacks? You need to add more 'cons' to it, maybe make the armour heavy and slow him down. Or maybe it tires him quickly when he tries to move. I can see that you're trying to make him an unbreakable tank, but I think you've done the job too well.
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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Volestri on Sun Nov 06, 2016 7:20 pm

    I feel like I am doing horrible at this ;-;

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    Re: Volestri, the Sauria soldier.

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 10:16 pm

    Yush!! You did good!

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