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    Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by Draligon on Mon Apr 18, 2016 8:05 pm

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    Name: Draligon Armatus Kaijin.
    Nickname: Dral, Deeda (by his daughter), Butch Alexander Hamilton(fake name).
    Age: 4,080 years old in kaiju form, looks about 35 years old in human form.
    Gender: Male.
    Sexuality: Straight.
    Species: Mutant electrical stegosaur. Scientific name being Brontospinus zeusensis, or Zeus' thunder spine.
    Alignment: Neutral good.
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 150 feet at the shoulder in kaiju form, 6'5 in human form.
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: In kaiju form, he has dark blue scales that cover his body. In human foirm, he has light human skin.
    Eyes: Electric blue.
    Hair: While he does not have hair naturally in kaiju form, he doe in human form. His hair is spiky, a little bit messy, and has a light blue hue to it.
    Looks:

    Kaiju form.
    At 150 feet and the shoulder, 400 feet from head to tail,and weighing in at 25,000 tons, he is one of the largest beings on the planet. His dark blue scales are rough, but his snow white underbelly is smooth, and he has a row of pointed plates on his back, all of them a dark yellow with a light yellow dot in the middle of them. On his tail, he has 6 thagomizers, all of them about 70 feet long. On another note, his head has a couple of spikes on his brow, and one nasal horn on his snout. His beak has a form of "tusks", which are actually sharpened points of his lower beak.

    Human form.
    In human form, he has a a mesomorph body type, meaning he is muscular and compact. He wears casual attire, stuff like blue jeans, blue derby shoes, white shirt with a dark blue jacket. Something to note is that his hair seems to stand up straight on and off depending on what situation he is in, almost as if there is a static charge jolting through his body unintentionally. For example, one of the times he is rarely made, his hair is standing up straight and sharp, but when he is sad, his hair droops down.

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    Strengths/skills:

    Super strength:
    In human form, he is well above normal human level strength, being able to lift a 3,221 pound car with ease before throwing it, as well as being able to rip a street sign from concrete with relative ease. It should be noted however that this strength is finite, as he draws most of his super human feats using extra electricity to boost his strength. Once depleted, he would still be a force to be reckoned with, but is nowhere near super human. This is also carried into his kaiju form, in which his strength will depend on how much juice he has in his system. For instance, with full juice, he could level a large building with ease, but without enough, he can't do it with a single swing of his tail.

    Foraging skills.
    With his heighten sense of smell, he is able to smell edible, non poisonous meals, as well as water. He can also use this sense to try and find a specific person, may it be a target, or may it be a friend.

    People skills.
    He is incredibly social with people, sometimes stopping completely what he is doing to chat with a person, get to know them, and maybe even becomes chat buddies, or even friends with them. However, he only does this to people that he senses isn't a threat to him, his daughter, and his team.

    Weaknesses/Flaws:

    Time limit.
    He has a time limit onto how long he can maintain his kaiju form while in combat, approximately 7 or so posts before having to go back into human form. While he can continue shifting, each time his limit goes down a post, until he has to recharge via consuming electricity. This can be lengthened if he has a stable supply of electricity, boosting each consumption with at least 1 post each, but, these are rare unless he is in a lightning storm, in a city, or is combating a electrical based foe. However, this form can be remain indefinite when not in combat.

    Elephant like sense of revenge.
    While he is a rather kind, and well meaning fellow, he is sometimes prone to try and seek out those who has hurt him and his loved ones. Because of this, he can't exactly think straight, almost going back to his animalistic nature, making him easy to agitate, as well as violent outbursts, something he does not want to do around a group of people, and even worse his daughter, so he tries to keep it cool the best he can.

    Dependence on electricity.
    He needs electricity to do his more impressive feats and attacks, without a stable supply, he won't be able to do much. However, he can draw electricity from outside eletrical sources, such as electricity based attacks, and even electricity using devices, though, it really depends how much electricity it contains. It could take him a while finding enough to do things.

    Semi pacifistic nature.
    While he does have a violent side to him, he does not like fighting, and would rather try and talk his way out of things instead of using violence as an answer. there are 2 reasons why he does this; reason 1 is that he wants to make a good example for his daughter, while reason 2 is his herbivorous nature, only using violence when seriously threatened, or seeking revenge.

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    Personality: How does one put this lightly? Draligon is kinda a softy. I mean, sure, he looks intimidating, but his true nature is that of a gentle giant, always peaceful, only aggressive when agitated via harmful things, or people. He is quite a talkative fellow, wanting to try and socialize with people from time to time, but mostly, he likes hanging out with his teammates, but most of all his daughter. A funny quirk to point out is that he likes to sometimes turn things he does into a little song. For instance, say he is looking for something, what he would do is sing, "Do, do, do, where is my thing~? Where is my thing~?". However, it should be noted that he can be extremely aggressive, and even depressed, but that is very rare.

    Likes/hobbies:
    1. His daughter, Aiko.
    2. His team, Dragon storm.
    3. Socializing.
    4. The occasional dad joke, or pun.
    5.  Fruits and veggies.
    6. Watching movies, stuff like smart and meaningful family films, or a witty movie of a sort.

    Dislikes:
    1. Highly aggressive people.
    2. Unnecessary cruelty.
    3. Getting treated poorly.
    4. Alcoholic items.
    Fears:
    Losing/hurting his daughter.
    He is extremely protective about his daughter, and will try everything in his power to try and keep her from harms way, so if something bad happens to her, (which kinda did happen) he will enter into a deep state of depression... until he sets off to try and find what dared to harm her in the first place. Same thing will happen to him if he was the one to have hurt her, minus the revenge part, and more of the depression part. This can be applied to physical pain, to mental pain.

    People fearing for what he really is.
    He can't help but have the fear of getting feared at by people, since for all they know, he is just a giant monster, a thing that, like in films, destroys cities, even though he is really a kind hearted person.

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    Family:
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    Parents: Scientists, D.N.A. of different stegosauridae dinosaurs, and a machine that acts like a artificial womb to produce eggs. Does those counts as parents?
    Mate: I don't know, is there anybody who likes a mutant dinosaur for a hubbie? N/A.
    Offspring: Aiko Papyrus Kaijin, adopted daughter.
    Relative: N/A.
    Brothers/sisters: Other unnamed subjects born with him, all deceased since they weren't healthy enough.
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    History: To be exact, Draligon's story was similar to Jurassic Park in a way. He was born on a secluded island unknown to the public via machines, but instead of a theme park, he was suppose to be used for biological warfare. He was born along side others of his new species, but wasn't the first batch to have been introduced to the world. The previous batches were not fit for survival, and soon perished either by a birth defect, or a immune system too weak to even last too long, so one after another, and through trial and error, they had accomplished their goals... kinda. To be exact, almost all of their final clutch has died mere days after hatching, except for one specimen, this specimen being what they later nicknamed as "Draligon". Thinking he might be the successor they are looking for, he was soon put into "training" mostly seeing what he was capable of. Even as a baby, he was at the height of a Indian elephant, and soon enough within a few years, he grew rather quickly. However, after a huge typhoon hit the island, they were force to evacuate, leaving Draligon behind to try and fend for himself. However, after some more years past, he D.N.A. seemed to have mutated for time, now being able to shapeshift into a human disguise. It is not known what caused this, but a likely theory is that some human D.N.A. got mixed into the process somehow, either intentionally or by mistake, and has laid dormant in him until now. Deciding to use this form for use, he began studying at the abandoned lab, and after years and years, was able to leave the island and assume a normal life, going under the fake name of "Butch Alexander Hamilton", but has his real name as "Draligon Armatas Kaijin". Many years pass afterwards, and he now has a adopted daughter, and even a team.
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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by sLy on Tue Oct 25, 2016 2:53 am

    @Draligon wrote:Daikaiju Form.
    Looking roughly like a T. Rex on steroids, his monster form is quite intimidating. Sporting spikes, and crocodilian like scutes on his body, something that differs from his prehistoric relatives. He is Jade Green, with Dark Green scutes, and has a Fiery Amber underbelly. He is almost immune to conventional military weaponry, such as tanks, planes, bullets, and some forms of lasers, though this does not carry on to his human form. Also unlike the T. Rex, he posses a third finger, using said finger as a thumb, which was used to pin dead prey to his chest to prevent swinging.

    Him being able to transform into a monstrous T-Rex is already decent enough of a character, but adding his ability to tank everything in bold is way too much. It basically makes him unkillable. Overpowered.

    @Draligon wrote:Blazing Roar.
    The Blazing roar is a powerful heat breath, and is made out of plasma. Being plasma, it could be as hot as several thousand degrees Celsius, easily melting metal, and obliterating buildings. It also has two modes, standard and overdrive. Standard is a light green, but overdrive is a violent orange, and is much stronger. Overdrive can only be triggered when feeling intense amounts of rage.

    Yyyyyeah. If it only takes one blast to rip through a building as well as melt a huge hole in any infrastructure, it will be a huge wonder why TB didn't declare a national emergency at this point. This is far too overpowered, even more so for the overdrive version. I would consider lowering the temperature of his breath, probably down to being as much as being able to melt iron or steel.

    @Draligon wrote:Super Strength.
    Draligon is able to lift up an object that is equal to his own weight with his jaws with relative ease, his weight being 50,000 metric tons.

    A T-Rex weighs on average 8,000 tons and your character is more than 6 times this amount. He can basically lift the heaviest tank (62 tons) in existence. That alone showed his strength is far too overpowered.


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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

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    Post by sLy on Tue Oct 25, 2016 11:53 pm

    You need to ellaborate more on your super strength. What kind of strong foes can he take on? What is the maximum he can lift in his kaiju form? Note, Im not going to permit anything beyond 100t.


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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by Draligon on Wed Oct 26, 2016 6:14 pm

    Bumpity bump bump bump.
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    Post by sLy on Wed Oct 26, 2016 6:36 pm

    APPROVED


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    Out for edits

    Be sure to compare his strengths and senses to that of a human when you are done.


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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by Bermuda on Wed Jan 18, 2017 6:53 pm

    *Pokes staff* You heard the man, he said bump.


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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by sLy on Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:46 pm

    DECLINED.

    Now that I have another look at it, I realised you have been listing way too many advantages to his abilities while masking it with things like 'reduced strength' for human form when it's common sense that he would be weaker at human form. I will start off by listing his key advantages:


    • Can reach 40metres when needing speed
    • Can reach 50metres when needing strength for fighting (can lift up to 100tons)
    • Daikaiju form, he can tank bullets and even missiles!
    • Has strong sense of smell for tracking
    • Strong sense of hearing
    • Strong eyesight
    • Above average hearing, eyesight and smell in human form
    • High regeneration


    Then we have the disadvantages:


    • Weak underbelly


    Yyyyyyeah, not going to work. You have far too many strengths over your one true weakness. You will also notice that I have ignored some of your weaknesses because, after reading your app several times, they are not actually weaknesses. Your 'slow regeneration' is actually already faster than an average human. No one can instantly heal a minor cut, or take 10 minutes to heal a large slab of flesh cut out of them. It's actually a strength. 'Stumpy T-rex arms' is immediately mitigated by using his mouth and jaw strength to rip literally anything apart. And his 'slow speed', I am not sure if this is mitigated by just going into his normal kaijuu form at 40metres because you mentioned this form is for speed. May I also suggest that you indicate how fast he can go in this form.

    Again, I'm not counting your supposed human weaknesses because, frankly, compared to a normal human, they aren't weaknesses at all but actually strengths or just normal for a human. I should also point out that his inability to use 'Blazing Roar' at human form is a limitation to his ability.

    For Blazing Roar, I am not sure about this ability, because it is termed a 'One-shot wonder'. This means just trying to approve a highly OP ability by balancing it with outrageous weaknesses (in your case, limited to only 5 shots per combat). Seeing that it can completely obliterate a tank, it will one-shot anyone regardless. As a suggestion, reduce the severity of the beam, and indicate its speed after leaving his mouth (suggest a slower speed so people can dodge it).


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    Re: Draligon, The electric juggernaut. (TOTAL REMAKE)

    Post by Troy on Thu Jan 19, 2017 5:56 pm

    sLy, do you think I could start a new with this app? Thinking of doing something new, and less Godzilla esque with this app. You know, something big, but not like this? Still keeping the name Draligon tho.


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    Thats fine


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