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    Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Askyus on Sat Mar 26, 2016 8:07 pm

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    Name: Sunesning
    Nickname: Sune
    Age: 26
    Gender: Female
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Species: Human
    Alignment: Neutral
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 5"8
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Sune has a light tan on her skin and it's easy to tell she has an asian heritage.
    Eyes: Sunesing has intense maize(yellow) irises.
    Hair: Sunesing has long dark hair, which is sometimes braided into pigtails. She rarely cuts it, resulting in it growing incredibly long.
    Looks: In public, Sune is usually wearing her neutral orange and gray speckled robes that cover everything from her shoulders and head down to her lower legs. When she does not wear her hood, she tends to catch the attention of some onlookers with her rather pretty face. She is fit but not overly skinny.
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    Specialties
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    Strengths/skills: Sune is a passionate energy mage, and studies the art broadly in her free time. She has a keen interest in learning and knowledge, particularly in the field of magic, and has incredible finesse with controlling magic, skilled enough to compete with some of the oldest and renowned magicians in Eslon. As far as her physical strength goes, she tries to keep herself fit but is not exceptionally strong.
    Weaknesses/Flaws: Even with her magic, Sune isn't cut out for a fight with someone that also uses magic, as she's useless when it comes to defensive spells. She's also quite skeptical - if a friend tells her something she'll be inclined to go check it herself even if that thing might be obviously correct. She never learned to swim, so getting her to hop into a deep body of water is near impossible.
    Special Abilities:

    The effectiveness of Sune's magic is heavily reliant on her ability to concentrate, so the side-effects of casting these(nausea, dizzyness etc.) do impact her ability to keep casting a lot.

    Fireball: A ball of flame(about the temperature of natural fire, 1000 C) that momentarily heats(and depending on the material, combusts) anything solid it touches before vanishing. She can conjure these quite easily, but they carry very little kinetic energy, and only set things on fire, so anything inflammable and larger than a plastic cup is not affected by this at all. These are typically quite small - no larger than the palm of your hand, and don’t create smoke. She can keep the fireball in her palm for almost half an hour before it goes out, which can cast a little bit of light. She can aim these well at ranges below 250 feet. After 200 feet they begin to rapidly lose their energy and dissipate at 300 feet. Their cooldown is one post.

    Kinetic Manipulation: A very general kind of magic which lets Sune accelerate and decelerate objects, like telekinesis. The spells are easy to start using, the hard part is getting good at doing it. The further away something is, the harder it is to concentrate on it and the less effective a spell is(This doesn't usually affect spells like fireball because once she lets it go, she stops controlling it). Sune can use this at a range of ten meters to lift something that weighs about one and a half kilograms. Anything within this range she can move at about 3 km/h up and sideways. She can move up to three objects simultaneously, although she’ll be quite clumsy and side effects will impact her three times as much. She can’t use this on a dime, so stopping something like a knife or a bullet is impossible for her. After three minutes of moving things around, Sune will get headaches and feel dizzy, so she takes short breaks every minute.

    Heat Lance: Harder to use than Fireball, this spell creates a jet of hot air and expands it in a direction(The temperature of this beam is about 1,500 C). It has a range of two feet and dissipates after about a minute(two posts).
    This can melt through small sections of metal, in a similar fashion to an oxygen lance/oxyacetylene torch. It may set things on fire as well, but would be more likely to burn through it. If a person or unprotected organic material were to come into direct path of the beam and within 2 feet, they would suffer terrible 3rd degree burns. She can only use this once every eight posts, and it consumes a lot of her energy as well as being somewhat nauseating to cast.

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    Personality:
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    Personality:If Sunesning wants someone to do something, she can usually persuade them, and has a way with words. While generally of a conservative and skeptical attitude, she's usually a kind and generous person to strangers and friends, helping those in need or comfused, and can be a great friend, but can hold a grudge behind someone's back, and doesn't take well to people that come off to her as arrogant or nasty. Sune doesn't take personal interest in 'petty' things like fashion and gossip, but she doesn't mind her friends taking interest. When she meets people with similar interests or similar affinities, she can be rather eager to talk and is very honest with her friends, believing that true friends will stick with her through anything. Sune is highly competitive, and revels in learning from others as well as beating them

    Likes/Hobbies:
    >Using Magic
    >Learning and studying in general
    >Getting to know people
    >Historical European Martial Arts(hobby) - Not the best at it, but every week or so she attends a duelling class.
    Dislikes:
    Sune loathes arrogance and those who put others below them or treats others differently without having even met them.
    She doesn't like it when someone else takes her spotlight, and gets really peeved off if someone disrupts her while she's working.
    Because she can't swim, she also dislikes deep pools and going into the sea.
    Fears: For a mage skilled in combustion magic and who studied it thoroughly, Sune is scared of burning to death, or being permanently scarred by fire. She's also scared of the dangers in her craft, and that she day one day cripple herself, never to do magic again.
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    Family:
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    Parents: Sune's mother died of a lethal illness that was rampant at the time, so her father had to take care of her and her brother till they were old enough to move out. They will remain unnamed unless Sune mentions them.
    Mate: N/A
    Offspring: N/A
    Relative: Her brother and father.
    Brothers/sisters: Her brother, who will remain unnamed unless Sune mentions him.
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    History: Sune was born to a middle-class family in a small mining town. She was born only a year after her older brother. When she was eight her mother was diagnosed with an incurable illness, and died two years later. Her father tried to take care of her and her brother, making sure they got a good education, but they moved out at the age of fourteen and fifteen to seek work and their own homes.

    While her brother had no trouble getting a job, Sune went through a lot of jobs until she settled for working as a librarian's assistant(during which time she discovered her affinity for energy-manipulation, or magic) to a librarian herself, before she truly started to study magic and its potential.

    RP paragraph: Flicking back her orange hood, Sune looked around. At last, here she was. After a month of travelling Cormere, she was finally standing at the doorstep of one of the greatest magical libraries east of Eiria. The wisp lanterns shone brightly in the night, illuminating a sign that read 'Xerina Family Infostore'. Infostore - what an odd word. There was no doubt it was the right building, and she stepped forwards to open it. She frowned. The door wouldn't open. She pushed against it and tugged sharply on the handle, but it wouldn't budge. A small piece of brown paper fell from above her. "Closed for the next three weeks, 28th October-19th November- wow, really? I don't have three weeks!" She stepped back and looked around the darkness. She slid her hood on just as rain began to shower down on the town. Typical.

    She would try to cast a spell to give her some light, but fireballs didn’t tend to work very well under  heavy rain. Sune looked down the road for any carriages before putting her head down and running to the small Inn on the other side of the street. The lights were on and there seemed to be a few people inside, judging by the voices. She kept the hood over her head and opened the door.


    Last edited by Askyus on Sat Dec 10, 2016 5:47 pm; edited 12 times in total (Reason for editing : Should be done... right?)
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Sunesning on Sat Nov 05, 2016 10:31 pm

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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 12:44 pm

    Heya Sunesning! Just letting you know that we have updated the character sheet, so if you could, please use the template in this link here and edit your app to match it ^^

    Please, when you have made the adjustments, bump when you are ready!
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Sunesning on Sun Nov 06, 2016 7:30 pm

    Bump again
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 06, 2016 10:12 pm

    If you wanted, maybe create an ability sheet, put a WIP in the title, and link the ability sheets to your profile? As everything else looks good.
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Sunesning on Thu Nov 10, 2016 10:38 pm

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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Lexia on Sun Nov 13, 2016 5:56 pm

    I need you to include max speeds, ranges, max lifting weights, etc on your telekinesis.

    Limit the things your fireball can explode, as it currently can blow up obsidian and diamonds, which is kinda over the top.

    All in all, I need you to put limits on all your abilities, tell me what they can and can't do in your app.

    (Probably easier to talk about all this in Skype as we have been doing)
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Cedric on Wed Nov 16, 2016 2:46 pm


    Okay, Sune <3

    So, what's up is that your ability over fire is kind of border-line Event Character stronk. As almost every known element has a combustion point. It might be stupidly high for a temperature, but it's still got some form of combustion degree.

    Now, I know that's not what you mean. But what I'd like is for you to put a degree of heat on each ability, and consider limiting heat lance. Note the degree and area for heat lance, as well as giving it a smaller range. Thermal energy with air is a lot harder to control, as Oxygen torches actually have to have a purer percentage of oxygen for them to ignite and keep the amount of heat as high as they do.

    Another issue is that cooldowns need to be within post-limits. As in how many posts one thing lasts, how many posts until it can be cast again, etc. You also need to post a specific degree things reach.

    As for the Telekenisis: Can she use the telekinesis to stop small bullets? Whats the quickest thing she can stop? How fast can she move things (max speed), range, how many things can she control, power split between the three? (we decided 3 in Skype Chat)

    If you have any further questions, Please bring them up with any of the Admins. We'd like to talk to you privately to discuss further as to what needs to be tweaked, and agree that hands-on help and examples would be the best route for this character

    Thank you for understanding and cooperating

    -Cedric Vael





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    Because he's got so many damn knights."
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Sunesning on Sat Dec 10, 2016 3:49 am

    Bump, I guess?
    It might still need neefing, I don't know yet.
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Cedric on Sat Dec 10, 2016 8:13 am



    Gonna make this simple.

    Your blade needs to be once every eight post, 1500 degrees max. You can still melt metal.

    Fireball needs to be cut to 300 feet maximum. Holy shit 600 is too far. Like, holy Jesus eating a lamb. Preferably, say 200 feet is maximum intensity, and at 300 it fully dissipates.

    Other than that, you're golden.

    Sorry if I sound tired, I'm exhausted xP Fix these and we can approve~



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    Because he's got so many damn knights."
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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Askyus on Sat Dec 10, 2016 5:48 pm

    Done.


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    Re: Sunesning (Ready)

    Post by Cedric on Sat Dec 10, 2016 6:27 pm

    APPROVED.


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    "It's not that I hate people. It's that I dislike people. There IS a difference, even if it's subtle. Just means that making friends is a bit harder for me. Speaking of which, Why's Allelujah's kingdom considered to be the darkest kingdom of all?


    Because he's got so many damn knights."

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