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    Melanie the Corrupted Spirit

    Post by Guest on Tue Dec 15, 2015 11:57 pm

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    Name: Melanie Thompson
    Nickname: Mel, Melinoe
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Sexuality: Homosexual
    Species: Human
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
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    Clan:
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    Clan: Rouge
    Rank: N/A
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 5'2
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Pale skin
    Eyes: Grey/blue
    Looks: Melanie is short for her age, and gets constantly picked on for it. Her long dark hair flows down to her hips, and she wears large-rimmed glasses. She wears a light grey beanie on her head, and her hair is usually kept down. Mel wears an assortment of jumpers, and atop of which is a navy blue hooded vest with fur lining the hood. She wears white shorts on top of black tights, and shin-high black boots with small heels.
    She has a long scimitar that connects to her back via a small magnetic strip.
    Extra: Her scimitar is red-bladed with a black section running down the middle. The hilt is plain black and the blade emits a faint yellow light.
    She also has two large wings. One is a torn, battered demon wing, the spines black and the folds a dark purple. The other is a snowy white, feathered angel wing.
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    Hobbies/skills: Mel is a natural survivalist,and also loves to draw and write. She is great at manipulating people, and making herself seem inconspicuous, and can easily make herself invisible in a crowd.
    Strengths: Being small, she is quite agile and is nearly impossible to hit due to her speed and size.
    Weaknesses: Her split personalities are like a conscience, one telling her to do something, the other contradicting. The voices never stop talking, they are always in her mind and never leave. One tells her to do good, and always take the passive route. The other tells her to go bad, and kill anything in her way. She herself hasn't any preference, but chooses to kill some and spare others. The voices regularly insult her too, such as calling her pathetic for not killing, or a monster for her deaths.
    Her shadow ability does not work in bright, unshaded places, which is why she prefers the dark to light. In fact, she can even burn in the sun, which is why she covers up as much skin as possible. It has ten second or so cooldown, and she has to come out a shadow to fight.
    Her wings are a weak spot; as they are so large, they are an easy target. They are also extremely sensitive, and even just poking them sends a mild burst of pain. Imagine being shot at with a gun, or arrows.
    Accessories: She has her scimitar, the only defence she has.
    Special abilities: She can literally fade into the shadows, and walk to and from other shadows. She can disappear into other people's shadows, and follow them around without having to walk behind them, trying not to be caught. She is fully aware in her shadow state, and can hear, see, smell, taste and feel if needed. She usually uses this ability to eavesdrop and find out weaknesses.
    She can also summon endless 'shadow copies' of things, such as her scimitar or herself. This uses up a lot of energy, depending on what she's multiplying. Her sword is quite cheap to copy, whilst cloning herself would take up a large amount of energy, and she can only do five at one time, without any other things being copied.
    She feeds off shadows, and can give herself a small boost by absorbing a shadow. This is normally a very mild boost, unless she absorbs a very large shadow, and even when she drains a building's shadow it only gives her a moderate boost.
    She can also fly. Not very well, as her wings are so beaten up, but she still can.
    Attacks: She can preform a 'tri-attack' of sorts. She shoots out three beams, one dark as night and filled with hatred, and searing fury. One is a blinding light, filled with passion, and bitter love. The third is a dreary grey, ice cold and freezing. This, however, takes up a large amount of energy, therefore she only uses it as a last resort.
    Combat style: She can hide in the shadows to try and confuse the enemy, then pop out and attack them from behind, before disappearing again.
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    Personality:
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    Personality: Melanie has multiple personalities, which I've briefly explained earlier. Her two other personalities constantly argue, and never let Mel make her own decisions.
    Melinoe is the main personality, the one with full control over her body, actions but unfortunately not thoughts. She has no thoughts, and therefore never speaks. She just does whatever her other two 'sisters' tell her to do, and lets them speak when they want to speak.
    Styx is the corrupted, evil mind of Melanie. She is a master manipulator, and feeds off hatred, wrath and fear. Though she cannot control their body, she has the main ability to speak, which allows her to deceive people, flirt, and anything else that speaking enables you to.
    Astraea is the pure mind, and never wants to harm anything. She controls the thoughts, though Styx invades and argues constantly with her, which makes Mel have constant headaches and never thinks straight.
    Likes: Melinoe has no preference. Styx likes death, hatred, wrath and battle. Astraea prefers peace, love, comfort and purity.
    Dislikes: Melinoe hates that Styx and Astraea never get along. Styx hates everything that Astraea likes, and Astraea dislikes things that Styx likes.
    Fears: Melinoe fears that one day, she will simply disappear. Or that one of her sisters will eventually end her, as she is no use to either of them.
    Both Astraea and Styx fear that Melinoe will one day banish both of them, finally overcoming her mental barrier and becoming strong enough to think, and control her thoughts.
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    Family:
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    Parents: Ashley, deceased, mother. Father unknown.
    Mate: N/A
    Offspring: N/A
    Relative: Dawn, deceased, aunt.
    Brothers/sisters: N/A
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    History: (i'm tired i'll work on this later on the extended histories thing?)
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    RP paragraph: Melanie stalked her perimeter. This was said to be her aunt's favourite place to escape her hectic teammates, and just relax. It was such a secluded part of the forest, with the trees' leaves reddening and slowly floating to the ground. There was a rock near the edge of the clearing, in which Melanie had etched an untidy, but sincere message to her relatives. Suddenly, she heard a rustle in the branches, and thrust her palm out, in which a deep purplely-black shadow sword shot out of, and impaled the intruding animal. "Looks like I've got dinner tonight," a raspy voice muttered.


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    Re: Melanie the Corrupted Spirit

    Post by Griffin on Wed Dec 16, 2015 2:03 am

    Melanie wrote: She can literally fade into the shadows, and walk to and from other shadows. She can disappear into other people's shadows, and follow them around without having to walk behind them, trying not to be caught. She is fully aware in her shadow state, and can hear, see, smell, taste and feel if needed. She usually uses this ability to eavesdrop and find out weaknesses.

    Now, is the jumping from shadow-to-shadow thing instant or does she have to physically move to that shadow? If so then I'm afraid I can't accept this. This was an ability with a few characters in the past and has proven OP because, while more restricted, it is a variant of teleportation which, due to our attempt to cut down on the creation of over powered characters, has been banned.

    Other than that I don't see any more problems. Cool character too. I like it.





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    Re: Melanie the Corrupted Spirit

    Post by Guest on Wed Dec 16, 2015 8:34 am

    Thank you! And I didn't really think this through. She has to come out of a shadow to go into another if said shadows aren't connected by another shadow. If this is too overpowered, please tell me!
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    Re: Melanie the Corrupted Spirit

    Post by Yuuki on Wed Dec 16, 2015 8:49 am

    So it's not instant then.

    Coolz.

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