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    Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

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    Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Hunter Dracon on Sun Dec 06, 2015 7:21 pm

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    Name: Hunter Dracon
    Nickname: Hunter, Drake
    Age: 26
    Gender: Male
    Sexuality: Straight
    Species: Hunter is one third pheonix and one third Dragon (Night fury to be precise). The other third is human.
    Alignment: Hunter is a rogue but he usually doesn’t do anything that doesn’t help anyone. He’s one of those guys where he fights to protect those that cannot protect themselves.
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    Clan: Theta’s Outcasts
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    Clan: Theta’s Outcasts
    Rank: Successor, Sniper, Assassin, and Top Ranking Ace Fighter Pilot.
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    Appearance:
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    Height: 6’6”
    Skin/Fur/Scales, Etc.: Hunter has a pair of dragon wings that have feathers on them. (like in the movie eragon XD) The wings are exactly the same with no abnormalities. The feathers on the wings are five different colors. Cyan, Black, White, Purple, and Green. Hunter has white, cyan, and black scales scattered across his body. But they’re in a symmetrical pattern and very few people have seen him without a shirt on. he has black hair with a few white streaks here and there. He also has one cyan streak in the front. He also has a tail that is linked to his the part of that is a night fury. He has a pair of extra maneuvering fins that are retractable just like his wings and look the same as well.

    Eyes: Hunter’s eyes change depending on what he’s doing. If he’s in combat his eyes shine a bright cyan.
    Looks: He has slightly tan skin with
    Extra: Has an Australian accent, and prefers to make friends and get to know people his way.
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    Hobbies/skills: Stealth, Precision shooting, mid-air combat, Flying Fighter jets.
    Strengths: He can move without any sound and he can also move extremely fast, whether it’s in the air or on the ground. His top speed is mach 5.5.
    Weaknesses: One of Hunter’s few weaknesses is his bones. They’re hollow to allow easy flight, faster movement speed, and even quieter movement. This means his bones are more brittle and break much more easily than they would if they were solid. Another one of his weaknesses is his fear of eels. If you show him an eel or anything similar and he recovers from the shock, he WILL kill you. No questions asked. 
    Accessories: His primary weapon is a 7.62x54r Tactical VEPR DMR sniper rifle and a pair of hidden blades. His secondary weapons are a .45 pistol (the shells eject straight up instead of up and to the right), twin swords, several knives, and a .308 lever action pistol.
    Special abilities: Yes. other than the ability to fly he can disappear into shadows (basically shadow traveling). Howeever, he can only shadow travel eight times a day. He can also change his voice entirely when he wants to disguise himself (it really comes in handy).
    Attacks: His attacks are irregular and random. Never really using any specific pattern or style.
    Combat style: Hunter prefers to use long range to kill most of his targets. But there are times when this is not necessary and he uses the rest of his arsenal for short range and melee fighting.
    Extra: Hunter is very rich considering he's an ace mercenary fighter pilot. So he has multiple vehicles at his disposal, including a street legalized Kawasaki Ninja H2R.
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    Personality: Friendly, gentlemanly towards girls, tends to keep his distance towards everyone but his friends. Hunter likes to scare the living shit out of people. He uses his mastery of stealth, and unseen movement to literally give everyone heart attacks. He likes to kill his enemies in any way possible.
    Likes: Girls (obviously), Good alcohol, very spicy alcoholic drinks, weapons, sketching, writing, reading, and gaming.
    Dislikes: Hackers, Traitors, Eels, Templars, His enemies, and girls that just want to fuck him because they think he looks hot and all that shit.
    Fears: Eels and betrayal.
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    Family:
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    Parents: Deceased
    Mate: N/A
    Offspring: N/A
    Relative: Deceased
    Brothers/sisters: Deceased
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    History: Hunter’s entire family was presumed dead when they all went missing after the discovery of the Theta epidemic.
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    RP paragraph: Hunter stood up and saluted as his commanding officer entered the room. “At ease.” she said and he sat down. “So what’s next on our agenda of things?” he asked. “We have very few pilots these days and we’re running low on ammo, supplies, and pilots for missions.”

    Hunter sat on top of the largest building he could find in the large city he was to carry out his next mission in. He flexed the extra muscles in his back and his wings unfolded through the velcro sealed holes he had in his hoodie. for his wings. As he did this his tail fins and maneuvering fins unfolded as well showing multicolored feathers that glimmered in the evening sunlight. Those feathers allowed Hunter to fly quickly and silently no matter what happened. He leaped off the building and dove towards the ground towards his target, unsheathing both his hidden blades in the process. All anyone that was watching could see was a multicolored blur heading towards the most tyrannical person in the entire city. Hunter hid his wings and tailfins once he reached a 50 feet above his target and his hidden blades plunged into the skull of Jackson Jergus Reed, the head of the templar group in the city.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Yuuki on Sun Dec 06, 2015 7:28 pm

    Coolio. I like your character. And since I'm too lazy to grab my approved button again...

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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by sLy on Tue Dec 15, 2015 5:26 pm

    DECLINED.

    Hunter Dracon wrote:
    Hobbies/skills: Stealth, Precision shooting, mid-air combat, Flying Fighter jets.
    Strengths: He can move without any sound and he can also move extremely fast, whether it’s in the air or on the ground. His top speed as a night fury is mach 7.5 and his top speed in his human form is mach 3.75.
    Weaknesses: One of Hunter’s few weaknesses is his bones. They’re hollow to allow easy flight, faster movement speed, and even quieter movement. Another one of his weaknesses is his fear of eels (which he has gotten over due to many of his enemies trying to subdue him using them. So he began to build a tolerance for them). if you ever show him an eel or anything similar he WILL kill you. No questions asked. His third weakness is the subject of his family. Hunter can’t get drunk BUT… he has a weakness for good alcohol, and very spicy hot alcoholic drinks.
    Accessories: His primary weapon is a 7.62x54r Tactical VEPR DMR sniper rifle and a pair of hidden blades. His secondary weapons are a .45 pistol (the shells eject straight up instead of up and to the right), twin swords, several knives, and a .308 lever action pistol.
    Special abilities: Yes. other than the ability to fly he can disappear into shadows (basically shadow traveling). He can also change his voice entirely when he wants to disguise himself (it really comes in handy). Puls he has two forms. His creature form and his bipedal anthro/humanoid form.

    Basically you have a lot of strengths, abilities and accessories combined compared to how crippling your weaknesses are:

    -Can transform into a dragon
    -Travel at mach 3.75 at least
    -Shadow travel
    -Tactical Sniper rifle
    -2 pistols
    -2 swords
    -2 'hidden blades'
    -Couple of knives

    And all of these against your weaknesses which I find some issues with:

    -Hollow bones allows faster travel perhaps but wouldn't that make your bones extremely fragile that it will break if you ever go supersonic (Mach speed)? Or do you mean he has no bone marrow? (Which wouldn't really help him go faster.) Overall, how does hollow bones contribute to as a weakness? You need to specify this.

    -Fear of eels. I have discussed this with you and, unfortunately, the fear of eels thing doesn't work as a weakness and should just stick with being a fear. You mentioned he built tolerance against it, so that means this fear of eels thing no longer works as a weakness. Even if someone, for some reason, is carrying an eel and shows it to Hunter, they will just get murdered in Hunter's anger and insanity.

    -Weakness for good alcohol is...actually not a weakness and is probably taken way too literally. Hunter isn't an alcoholic and, although may develop alcoholism, doesn't actually get drunk at all according to his app. This belongs to his 'Likes', not his weaknesses. It's not like Hunter's targets will be carrying around any alcoholic drinks and shout out towards him and ask him if he wants a drink to save their skins. Overall, not a weakness.

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    Overall, you have dragon transformation, shadow travelling (partially like teleport), an arsenal of weapons for both long range and close combat uses, and can travel several times the speed of sound. Altogether these greatly outweigh the one actual, though pretty vague, weakness which you have listed. Therefore Hunter is considered overpowered at this stage.

    PM a staff if you have either any issues with my argument, or if you want the app re-approved.
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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Hunter Dracon on Thu Dec 17, 2015 9:39 am

    I've redone some of it sly. Please check it over.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by sLy on Thu Dec 17, 2015 6:58 pm

    You still need to describe how hollow bones are considered a weakness. Does his bones break easily on impact? The same goes for the 'subject of family'. These 2 weaknesses are far too vague for me to consider it a pass, when comparing to the abilities and weapons you have.

    Also, going with what One wants to do about limiting OP characters, you need to describe a limitation for shadow travelling. Otherwise this, combined with your mach speed travelling, makes it impossible to even scratch Hunter.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Hunter Dracon on Wed Apr 06, 2016 9:17 pm

    Crikey! *Bump* Please check it over again. I got rid of some stuff that i thought was waaaay too OP.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Griffin on Thu Apr 07, 2016 12:03 am

    Me and Sly had fun picking at this.

    DECLINED.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Yuuki on Thu Apr 07, 2016 7:01 am

    We also have a new template. So please switch your character over to that template.


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    Re: Hunter Dracon: The Dreaded Aerial Sniper and Assassin of Theta [Re-approval needed]

    Post by Minea on Thu Apr 07, 2016 8:46 am

    I've heard of this new character sheet thing, but I can't find it. Where is it exatly? And we should probably get rid of the outdated sticky.


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